I have re thought the stages of the sequence, by adding in a few new ideas i feel that it will become stronger in respect to showing a full circular narrative, helping the audience to make more sense of it and making it easier for them to understand it.
I did a really quick sketch of each stage of the sequence which i have scanned in and shown here;
Explaining the different stages of the sequence a little bit, basically the sequence will start with the exit sign, the next frame will be of the person who has stolen car number 1 walking away from the car towards the multi-storey car park' exit. The next frame will be a view of them walking out the car park on the the road and out into the open, unnoticed by anyone for the crime that has been committed. With the next frame following on from that being a close up of the persons face, looking rather pleased with them self and happy to be walking away and ready for round 2. This will lead on the an image of the person walking towards another car in the area, having looked around to find what looks easily accessible, with the next fame being of the actually breaking into the car, when they will then get in and drive away down the road having successfully gained access and started the engine. The next frame will be of the second car being taken into a multi-storey car park, the same one as before as it is like his little place of hiding these cars for the day, until he eventually gets caught. The frame after that will be of him them dumping and walking away from car number 2 towards the exit like at the start of the sequence and then it links back round to the exit sign, completing the circular narrative.
Having received permission to go ahead and photograph in a multi-storey car park I am going to go out and shoot the whole sequence this weekend, I am hopeful that I am able to get some good photographs that show exactly what I am thinking in me head.
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